Which room in your home do you spend the most time in? Please elaborate.
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I spend the most time in my room.
Because I sleep 9 hours in my room, and also I study 1 hour in my room.
And then I exercise 2 hours in my room, and I get free time for 1 hour.
If I add it all, then I am spending 13 hours in my room.
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Hello [이름]!
I love my room too. Our rooms are our personal space. Thanks for sharing. See you tomorrow! ^^
>>CORRECT!
Because I sleep 9 hours in my room, and also I study 1 hour in my room.
Because I sleep 9 hours in my room, and also I study 1 hour in my room.
>>Because I sleep for 9 hours in my room, and also I study for an hour in my room.
And then I exercise 2 hours in my room, and I get free time for 1 hour.
And then I exercise 2 hours in my room, and I get free time for 1 hour.
>>I then exercise for 2 hours there and take a break for an hour.
If I add it all, then I am spending 13 hours in my room.
If I add it all, then I am spending 13 hours in my room.
>>If I add it all up, then I sped 13 hours in my room.
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