which season is the most beautiful?
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There are four season in my country,korea.
Among of them, I like summer. because I can break for long time by using vacation.
During vacation, I can do many things such as traveling with my friends or family, watching movie in my home.
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Among of them, I like summer. because I can break for long time by using vacation.
During vacation, I can do many things such as traveling with my friends or family, watching movie in my home.
There are four season in my country,korea.
>> There are four seasons in my country.
Among of them, I like summer. because I can break for long time by using vacation.
>>Among of them, I like summer the most because I can take a break for a long time.
During vacation, I can do many things such as traveling with my friends or family, watching movie in my home.
>>During vacation, I can do many things such as traveling with my friends or family and watching movies in my home.
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