Which sport do you think is the hardest, and would you try it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I swim three times a week.
I think It\'s so hard a round trip 50 meters.
sometimes my swimming instructor make us a ten turn.
It\'s the hardest so I feel I am going to die.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Wow, that sounds really intense! Swimming ten laps must take a lot of energy. But it’s great that you swim three times a week — that’s such good exercise! Thank you for sharing! ^^
~T. Jewel
I swim three times a week.
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>>I go swimming three times a week.
I think It\'s so hard a round trip 50 meters.
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>>I go swimming three times a week.
I think It\'s so hard a round trip 50 meters.
>>I think a 50-meter round trip is so hard.
sometimes my swimming instructor make us a ten turn.
sometimes my swimming instructor make us a ten turn.
>>Sometimes my swimming instructor makes us do ten laps.
It\'s the hardest so I feel I am going to die.
It\'s the hardest so I feel I am going to die.
>>It’s very hard, so I feel like I’m going to die.
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