Which vice do you think is the hardest to quit, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I almost always fail to get up early, because I almost always go to bed too late.
There are a lot of reasons such as studying, watching youtube and thinking about useless things like that.
I know that I should go to bed early for getting up early, but it\'s really hard for me to go to bed early.
I literaly want to change my sleep patterns.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning, [이름] [이름]! You gave a very honest and relatable answer, which makes your response engaging. Many people can understand your struggle with sleep habits, so your example is effective. To improve, focus on word choice (many reasons, unnecessary things) and avoid repetition. Overall, your answer is clear, natural, and easy to connect with, nice work!
-Teacher Wela
I almost always fail to get up early, because I almost always go to bed too late.
>> I almost always fail to get up early because I usually go to bed too late.
There are a lot of reasons such as studying, watching youtube and thinking about useless things like that.
>> There are many reasons, such as studying, watching YouTube, and thinking about unnecessary things.
I know that I should go to bed early for getting up early, but it\'s really hard for me to go to bed early.
>> I know that I should go to bed early to wake up early, but it is really hard for me to do so.
I literaly want to change my sleep patterns.
>> I literally want to change my sleep patterns.
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