Which was more effective against depression, a walk in the country or a walk in the shopping mall?
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Good evening, Sir [이름]!
Thank you so much for your time.
I hope that you will have a fantastic weekend.
I totally agree with you,
It is better to go to the countryside or do some outdoor activities to overcome depression.
We need to talk to someone too.
A person who has a lending ear and who can understand us.
In short, a great person like you.
Thanks for always being there to make me smile in class.
Your ideas and stories make me feel happy everyday,
Teacher Nina
I think it might be different by person.
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However, in general, people can relieve stress or depression by taking a walk in the country rather than going shopping.
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I also personally prefer to go hiking or to travel to the countryside to overcome depression.
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I think that going shopping or walking in the shopping mall would rather aggravate my feelings of depression.
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Looking at the people who laugh and talk with their friends cheerfully in joy will make me feel miserable.
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Although I am in the mood of awful desperation and feel hopeless, the world won’t change and earth is spinning as usual.
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It doesn’t matter how painful I am.
>> It doesn’t matter how painful it is for me.
>> OR: It doesn\'t matter how painful the situation I am going through.
No one cares about my problem.
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I am so sad to think that even If I did die, nothing would change.
>> I am so sad to think that even If I\'d die, nothing would change.
People around me and on TV will still be giggling and cracking jokes.
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This is life.
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All the tragedies and sad stories are not my business unless they are directly related to me.
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So if you want to solve your problem, don’t mingle with people.
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Just stay away from the world.
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