Which was more effective against depression, a walk in the country or a walk in the shopping mall?

2015-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think it might be different by person. However, in general, people can relieve stress or depression by taking a walk in the country rather than going shopping.I also personally prefer to go hiking or to travel to the countryside to overcome depression.I think that going shopping or walking in the shopping mall would rather aggravate my feelings of depression. Looking at the people who laugh and talk with their friends cheerfully in joy will make me feel miserable.Although I am in the mood of awful desperation and feel hopeless, the world won’t change and earth is spinning as usual. It doesn’t matter how painful I am. No one cares about my problem. I am so sad to think that even If I did die, nothing would change. People around me and on TV will still be giggling and cracking jokes. This is life. All the tragedies and sad stories are not my business unless they are directly related to me.So if you want to solve your problem, don’t mingle with people. Just stay away from the world.

강사 첨삭


Good evening, Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for your time.

I hope that you will have a fantastic weekend.

I totally agree with you,

It is better to go to the countryside or do some outdoor activities to overcome depression.

We need to talk to someone too.
A person who has a lending ear and who can understand us.
In short, a great person like you.

Thanks for always being there to make me smile in class.

Your ideas and stories make me feel happy everyday,

Teacher Nina


I think it might be different by person.

>> correct

However, in general, people can relieve stress or depression by taking a walk in the country rather than going shopping.

>> correct

I also personally prefer to go hiking or to travel to the countryside to overcome depression.

>> correct

I think that going shopping or walking in the shopping mall would rather aggravate my feelings of depression.

>> correct

Looking at the people who laugh and talk with their friends cheerfully in joy will make me feel miserable.

>> correct

Although I am in the mood of awful desperation and feel hopeless, the world won’t change and earth is spinning as usual.

>> correct

It doesn’t matter how painful I am.

>> It doesn’t matter how painful it is for me.

>> OR: It doesn\'t matter how painful the situation I am going through.

No one cares about my problem.

>> correct

I am so sad to think that even If I did die, nothing would change.

>> I am so sad to think that even If I\'d die, nothing would change.

People around me and on TV will still be giggling and cracking jokes.

>> correct

This is life.

>> correct

All the tragedies and sad stories are not my business unless they are directly related to me.

>> correct

So if you want to solve your problem, don’t mingle with people.

>> correct

Just stay away from the world.

>> correct

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