Which world leader would you most like to meet? Why?
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Good evening Mr. [이름]^^
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QUESTION: Which world leader would you most like to meet? Why?
Thank you for encourging me to study English and you always make me cheerful.
>>Thank you for encouraging me to study English and you always entertain me.
I want to meet U.S. President Donald Trump.
>>I\'d like to meet U.S. President Donald Trump.
I\'d like to meet and tell him to have a third summit with North Korea as soon as possible.
>>CORRECT!
If he say to have a third summit, my stock would go up and I can earn money.
>>If he says he\'ll have a third summit, my stock will go up and I can make money.
With that money, I want to go hiking with my family.
>>I want to go hiking with my family with that money.
Thank you.
>>CORRECT!
I guess many Koreans are really hoping for it - 3rd Summit!
It\'s possible that there will be a 3rd Summit soon, let\'s just wait for it Mr. [이름] :)
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