Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with famil
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I will choose to receiving a lower-paying job with shorter hours.
I know money can buy many this expect happiness.
I see my friends are received salary more than me.
One of friends works from 9am to 8pm usually. She finishes work 10pm three times a week.
She can\'t sleep enough and enjoy the time dinner.
She said she gets a lot of stress from the work.
Although she receives high salary, she can\'t spend money because she has short time on weekday.
She always sleep on weekend.
I don\'t want to live like her. I really like my work environment.
I work 9am to 6pm and I don\'t work overtime.
I will save money and enjoy my spare time instead of receiving high salary.
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Hi Kate!^^
Thank you for taking the time to make your homework. Your thoughts and ideas are really good. Keep it up! Have a nice day!^^
I will choose to receiving a lower-paying job with shorter hours.
>>> I will choose to receive a lower-paying job with shorter hours.
I know money can buy many this expect happiness.
>>> I know money can buy many things except happiness.
I see my friends are received salary more than me.
>>> I see my friends received a higher salary than me.
One of friends works from 9am to 8pm usually.
>>> One of my friends usually works from 9 AM to 8 PM.
She finishes work 10pm three times a week.
>>> She finishes her work at 10 PM, thrice a week.
She can\'t sleep enough and enjoy the time dinner.
>>> She has no enough sleep and can\'t enjoy her dinner time.
Although she receives high salary, she can\'t spend money because she has short time on weekday.
>>> Although she receives a high salary, she can\'t spend the money because she has a short time on weekdays.
She always sleep on weekend.
>>> She always sleeps on the weekend.
I work 9am to 6pm and I don\'t work overtime.
>>> I work from 9 AM to 6 PM and I don\'t work overtime.
I will save money and enjoy my spare time instead of receiving high salary.
>>> I can save money while enjoying my spare time rather than receiving a high salary.
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