Which would you choose, diamond or gold? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Obviously, I\'d love to choose the diamond. As far as I\'m concerned The price of gold that it depends on the economic situation and other factors. But, Diamond doesn\'t. Chatting briefly, I want to talk about ex-girlfriends. We made a promise to set up the couple rings with 14K or 24K of pure gold so that I worked hard for making up that. But, it\'s meaningless after breaking up with each other. So, it\'s kind different how much when I purchase that and when I sell that.
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Wonderful day to you, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.
Obviously, I\'d love to choose the diamond.
>>> CORRECT.
As far as I\'m concerned The price of gold that it depends on the economic situation and other factors.
>>> As far as I\'m concerned, the price of gold depends on the economic situation and other factors.
But, Diamond doesn\'t.
>>> But diamond doesn\'t.
Chatting briefly, I want to talk about ex-girlfriends.
>>> Chatting briefly, I want to talk about ex-girlfriends.
We made a promise to set up the couple rings with 14K or 24K of pure gold so that I worked hard for making up that.
>>> We made a promise to set up the couple rings with 14K or 24K of pure gold, so I worked hard to make that.
But, it\'s meaningless after breaking up with each other.
>>> But it\'s meaningless after breaking up with each other.
So, it\'s kind different how much when I purchase that and when I sell that.
>>> CORRECT.
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