Which would you prefer, studying at home or at school?
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I prefer to go to school instead of studying at home. I would like to see classmate and teachers. When I study in classroom, I can do eye-contact to the teacher and can feel a state of tensetion. That\'s why I like to study at school.
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Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I prefer studying at school than studying at home.
I would like to see classmate and teachers.
>> I would like to see my classmates and teachers.
>> OR: I\'d like to meet with my classmates and teachers.
When I study in classroom, I can do eye-contact to the teacher and can feel a state of tensetion.
>> When I study at school, I can have and eye-to-eye contact with the teacher and can feel a state of tension.
That\'s why I like to study at school.
>> These are the reasons why I like to study at school.
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