While on board
학생이 쓴 원문
While on board such as buses, trains, or planes, I prefer to watch movies or drama s. Watching some movies makes me not feel the boredom with long hours of trip.
Or I sometimes write diary or make plans for traveling. With that I can enjoy riding any transportation.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework! I agree with you: Doing something while commuting can lessen the boredom especially in long trips.
- T. Caitlyn
While on board such as buses, trains, or planes, I prefer to watch movies or drama s.
>> While on board, such as buses, trains, or planes, I prefer to watch movies or dramas.
Watching some movies makes me not feel the boredom with long hours of trip.
>> Watching movies helps me avoid boredom during long trips.
Or I sometimes write diary or make plans for traveling.
>> I also sometimes write in my diary or make plans for my travel.
With that I can enjoy riding any transportation.
>> With that, I can enjoy riding on any form of transportation.
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