while traveling
학생이 쓴 원문
I often lose something.
The most shocking incident was left my suitcase.
As I went to the airport I suddenly remembered and went back,
What I do not want to forget is a happy memory.
It is easier to remember a happy memory than a tough one.
So I try to keep my precious memories in [이름]d.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. Great job on your homework. Keep it up. You are doing great. -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> CORRECT
>> The most shocking incident was when I left my suitcase. (Where?)
>> CORRECT (You just have to put the correct punctuation)
>> As I went to the airport, I suddenly remembered ans went back.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT (You just have to put the correct punctuation)
>> So, I try to keep my precious memories in [이름]d.
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