White Christmas!

2013-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

I got a good time on this Christmas! I went skating with my brother and ate delicious food. But,,,, On this Christmas, It'became a green Christmas. Most people or lovers think White christmas is very special. So, love budded them and think "It's a good omen!" Also, I want to come White christmas!! Next year, I wish that Happy White Christmas~!!^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

Happy New Year!

It\'s nice to hear that you had fun during Christmas.

I had fun too.

You constructed good sentences today.

I made some corrections for you,please check them out!

Keep up the good work!

I\'m looking forward to seeing you again.

Always take care!

_T.Heidi

I got a good time on this Christmas!

>>I had a good time this Christmas.
I went skating with my brother and ate delicious food.

>>Correct
But,,,, On this Christmas, It\'became a green Christmas.

>>But this Christmas turned out to be a green Christmas.
Most people or lovers think White Christmas is very special.

>>Correct
So, love budded them and think \"It\'s a good omen!\"

>>Correct
Also, I want to come White Christmas!!

>>I also want White Christmas to come.
Next year, I wish that Happy White Christmas~!!^^

>>I wish I will have a Happy White Christmas next year! ^^

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