White Christmas!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Happy New Year!
It\'s nice to hear that you had fun during Christmas.
I had fun too.
You constructed good sentences today.
I made some corrections for you,please check them out!
Keep up the good work!
I\'m looking forward to seeing you again.
Always take care!
_T.Heidi
I got a good time on this Christmas!
>>I had a good time this Christmas.
I went skating with my brother and ate delicious food.
>>Correct
But,,,, On this Christmas, It\'became a green Christmas.
>>But this Christmas turned out to be a green Christmas.
Most people or lovers think White Christmas is very special.
>>Correct
So, love budded them and think \"It\'s a good omen!\"
>>Correct
Also, I want to come White Christmas!!
>>I also want White Christmas to come.
Next year, I wish that Happy White Christmas~!!^^
>>I wish I will have a Happy White Christmas next year! ^^
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