Who always asks favors from you?
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In my case as a nurse, the most of colleague ask me favors. Because we can’t work alone. I mean we have each takes but we also require cooperation. For example, basically we get 4 patients at least. If there is emergency situation, we can’t take care about all of our patients. Because we need to pay attention to a emergency case. It is difficult to work all tasks at the same time. Therefore we’re always thankful for helping each other.
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Thank you for this Yoon! Indeed, no man is an island.
In my case as a nurse, the most of colleague ask me favors. Because we can’t work alone.
>>> In my case, as a nurse, most of colleagues ask me favors because we can’t work alone.
I mean we have each takes but we also require cooperation.
>>> I mean, we each have our own tasks but we also require cooperation.
For example, basically we get 4 patients at least.
>>> correct
If there is emergency situation, we can’t take care about all of our patients. Because we need to pay attention to a emergency case.
>>> If there is an emergency situation, we can’t take care all of our patients because we need to pay attention to an emergency case.
It is difficult to work all tasks at the same time.
>>> It is difficult to work on all tasks at the same time.
Therefore we’re always thankful for helping each other.
>>> correct
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