Who am I?

2020-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I am a very honest and true person. Frankly, my very true personality is both my strength and my disadvantage. Sometimes I have a loss because I am true, However, I think it\'s good to be true. It\'s hard to work with people who hide something. Let\'s say I don\'t know anything I don\'t know. If I don\'t have anything, let\'s say I don\'t have anything. If I had done it, I\'d say I did it. In conclusion, I like sincere people and I want to be a true person forever.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ha!
Very well said.^^
I do like honest people, too.
Honesty is the best policy.
I hope you stay the way you are.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am a very honest and true person.
>> I am a very honest person.
Frankly, my very true personality is both my strength and my disadvantage.
>> Frankly, my honesty is both my strength and my weakness.
Sometimes I have a loss because I am true,
>> I sometimes feel that I\'m on the losing side because I\'m too honest.
However, I think it\'s good to be true.
>> Correct
It\'s hard to work with people who hide something.
>> Correct
Let\'s say I don\'t know anything I don\'t know.
>> Let\'s say it if we don\'t know anything.
If I don\'t have anything, let\'s say I don\'t have anything.
>> Let\'s also say it if we don\'t have anything.
If I had done it, I\'d say I did it.
>> If I had done something, I\'d say I did it.
In conclusion, I like sincere people and I want to be a true person forever.
>> In conclusion, I like sincere people and I want to be an honest person forever.

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