Who among your friends has a good chance of becoming more successful than now?
학생이 쓴 원문
I thought one friend when I saw this question.
He has spirit of challenge.
He is never scared a challenge. so he have tried many things.
Recently, he is open his own business.
I think he will become better.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. Thank you for this. Thank you for always answering your homework. Please take note of the corrections I made on your sentences. Keep it up and see you in class! ^^
-T. Julia
I thought one friend when I saw this question.
>> I thought of one friend when I saw this question.
He has spirit of challenge.
>> He has the spirit of challenge.
He is never scared a challenge. so he have tried many things.
>> He is never scared of challenges, so he has tried many things.
Recently, he is open his own business.
>> Recently, he opened his own business.
I think he will become better.
>> Correct
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