Who are pop culture icon in your country?Do you think they are good examples for [이름] people?
학생이 쓴 원문
The pop artist\'s name is BTS, they are ranked NO.1 on the Billboard chart.
Most of [이름] people admire their album and dance over the world
I \'m proud of them too.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름] [이름]. ^_^
T. Irene
The pop artist\'s name is BTS, they are ranked NO.1 on the Billboard chart.
>>> The most popular artist these days in Korea is BTS. They are ranked No. 1 on the US Billboard chart.
Most of [이름] people admire their album and dance over the world
Most of [이름] people admire their album and dance over the world
>>> Most of [이름] people admire their albums and dance moves over the world.
I \'m proud of them too.
I \'m proud of them too.
>>> Correct.
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