Who are the bad leaders?

2014-05-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Some experts in leadership say that the worst boss is a leader who does not smile. He/she is so authoritative and somewhat bureaucratic. He/she is always serious and does not have humor. He/she has forgotten how to laugh. The bad leader is a person who blames his/her employees when something goes wrong. When he/she is reprimanded by his/her boss, he/she conveys the same to his team members, while he/she gets all the credits or reputation when his/her team make an achievement. A bad boss is short-tempered so he/she can easily upset. He/she is not good at controlling his/her emotions. He/she does not have generosity and he/she is so strict about his employees’ failure or mistakes. He/she is so stingy with complimenting his employees. Look at yourself. What kind of a leader are you? Imagine how will your employees evaluate you? Will they remember you as a good and respectful leader later? Will they miss you when they leave your team and work for other teams?

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday to you! How is the weather in Korea?

It\'s raining in my city today.

I am not sure what kind of leader I am, but I will do my best to meet the expectations of my team members.

It is really hard to be a leader, but if you put yourself on the shoes of others, you will be a good leader.

You should now how to look back and to respect other people too.

Let us talk more about his in class. See you!

Thank you for a fantastic composition again.

I am so proud of you. Take Care!

Teacher Nina

 

Some experts in leadership say that the worst boss is a leader who does not smile.

>> Correct!

He/she is so authoritative and somewhat bureaucratic.

>> Correct!

He/she is always serious and does not have humor.

>> Correct!

>> OR: He/ she is always serious and does not have a sense of humor.

He/she has forgotten how to laugh.

>> Correct!

The bad leader is a person who blames his/her employees when something goes wrong.

>> Correct!

When he/she is reprimanded by his/her boss, he/she conveys the same to his team members, while he/she gets all the credits or reputation when his/her team make an achievement.

>> Correct!

A bad boss is short-tempered so he/she can easily upset.

>> A bad boss is short-tempered so he/ she can easily be feel upset.

He/she is not good at controlling his/her emotions.

>> Correct!

He/she does not have generosity and he/she is so strict about his employees’ failure or mistakes.

>> Correct!

He/she is so stingy with complimenting his employees.

>> Correct!

Look at yourself.

>> Correct!

What kind of a leader are you?

>> Correct!

Imagine how will your employees evaluate you?

>> Correct!

Will they remember you as a good and respectful leader later?

>> Correct!

Will they miss you when they leave your team and work for other teams?

>> Correct!

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