Who are the greatest women in your country’s history?
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Yu gwan-soon(a fighter for independence)
She was born in 1902.Japan colonized korea from 1910 to 1945.They banned koreans to use the korean(=hangeul) and tried to eliminate korea culture. Also, they took away lot of lands from us and killed so many innocent peoples. It was very hard time for them but it's not easy to fight against armed constable. But Yu, only 19 years-old at that time, never sucuumbed to their threats and fought against constables for independence of korea. She took lead to make bunch of korea flags and launched a movement on March 10th. She eventually passed away by constable's harassment but her effort and contribution made this time of korea I think.
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Yu gwan-soon(a fighter for independence)
She was born in 1902.Japan colonized korea from 1910 to 1945.They banned koreans to use the korean(=hangeul) and tried to eliminate korea culture. Also, they took away lot of lands from us and killed so many innocent peoples. It was very hard time for them but it\'s not easy to fight against armed constable. But Yu, only 19 years-old at that time, never sucuumbed to their threats and fought against constables for independence of korea. She took lead to make bunch of korea flags and launched a movement on March 10th. She eventually passed away by constable\'s harassment but her effort and contribution made this time of korea I think.
>> The greatest woman that I can think of is Yu Gwansun and is also known as Ryu Gwansun. She was born in December 16, 1902 during the Japanese colonization from 1910 to 1945. They banned Koreans to use Hangeul and tried to eliminate Korean culture. They also took away lots of lands from and killed many innocent people. It was such a hard time for them and it\'s not easy to fight against armed constables. But for Yu, who\'s only 19 years old that time never succumbed to their threats and against the constables for Korea\'s independence. She took the lead to make bunch of Korean flags and launched a movement on March 1st. She passed away by the constable\'s harassment but her effort and contribution gained freedom for Korea.
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