Who are the people you always rely on?
학생이 쓴 원문
I’m not used to relying on someone when I have some problems and get depressed, because I thought that’s mature attitude.
But I realized that even though someone couldn’t be actual solution, I need to rely on someone I can trust.
Because It can make life better.
강사 첨삭
Hello Julia, Thank you for this, you were able to express your thoughts, arguments, and ideas clearly and effectively. Keep expressing yourself because it will lead you to fluency in the English language. Take care!
Aki~
I’m not used to relying on someone when I have some problems and get depressed, because I thought that’s mature attitude.
>>> I’m not used to relying on someone when I have some problems and get depressed because I thought that’s a mature attitude.
>>> I’m not used to relying on someone when I have some problems and get depressed because I thought that’s an attitude if a matured person.
But I realized that even though someone couldn’t be actual solution, I need to rely on someone I can trust.
>>> But I realized that even though someone couldn’t be the actual solution, I need to rely on someone whom I can trust.
Because It can make life better.
>>> Correct
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