Who are the people you can always count on when you feel like chickening out?
학생이 쓴 원문
I can count on any people around me because it makes me feel a little bit better. When I feel like chickening out, I get so urgent that try to rely on anything, anyone ( even the one who I met for the first time LOL ). BUT I know that the last one who I can count on anytime, anywhere is me myself. I believe that I have 2 egoes inside of me. One is a chicken who is always reluctant to do something because of countless reasons. The other one brings the previous one to a cliff and push her down and yell \"Don\'t worry toooooo much!!!\". When this happens, I can make a progress. This happened regularly in my life. Thus, now, I try to believe in myself who have always challenged to something with a progress in the end.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this. You\'re right! The only person you can rely to is yourself, but we always need someone to be there for us. Anyways, very good in your sentences construction. Keep it up!
~T. Pamela
HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS/ALTERNATIVE SENTENCES:
I can count on any people around me because it makes me feel a little bit better.
CORRECT
or>>I can count on anyone around me because it makes me feel better.
When I feel like chickening out, I get so urgent that try to rely on anything, anyone ( even the one who I met for the first time LOL ).
>>When I feel like I\'m chickening out, I try to rely on anything or anyone. (even the one who I met for the first time. LOL)
BUT I know that the last one who I can count on anytime, anywhere is me myself.
>>But I know that the last person who I can count on to is myself.
I believe that I have 2 egoes inside of me.
>>I believe that I have 2 egos inside me.
One is a chicken who is always reluctant to do something because of countless reasons.
CORRECT - Good vocabulary.
The other one brings the previous one to a cliff and push her down and yell \"Don\'t worry toooooo much!!!\".
CORRECT - Good expression.
When this happens, I can make a progress.
CORRECT
or>>When this happens, I will make a progress.
This happened regularly in my life.
>>This happen very often in my life.
Thus, now, I try to believe in myself who have always challenged to something with a progress in the end.
>>Thus,now, I try to believe in myself who had always challenged to do something that can make a progress in the end.
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