Who are the people you can always trust?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always trust my family. I trust them even they tell a lie. I think that they have something reason.
In the old days I lent money to my friend, but the friend suddenly disappeared somewhere, l couldn\\\'t back my money. At that time I trusted my friend, so I lent my money to her. But she used me. I learned that don\\\'t trust everybody expeally about money.
Lately we can see voice fishing. Some people lost a lot of money. I feel very sad. We have to watch it for keep my money.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [Name]!
I\'m sorry to hear about your bad experience. I agree that we can only trust and lean on our family, especially during difficult times.
See you in class!
Aki~
I always trust my family.
>> CORRECT!
I trust them even they tell a lie. I think that they have something reason.
>>> I trust them even if they tell a lie. I think that they have some reason.
In the old days I lent money to my friend, but the friend suddenly disappeared somewhere, l couldn\\\'t back my money.
>>> In the old days I lent money to my friend, but the friend suddenly disappeared somewhere, and l couldn\'t get my money back.
At that time I trusted my friend, so I lent my money to her. But she used me.
>> CORRECT!
I learned that don\\\'t trust everybody expeally about money.
>>> I learned that I shouldn\'t trust everybody, especially about money.
Lately, we can see voice fishing. Some people lost a lot of money. I feel very sad.
>> CORRECT!
We have to watch it for keep my money.
>> We have to watch it to keep my money.
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