Who are the people you haven`t seen for a while?

2021-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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1. Who are the people you haven`t seen for a while? They are some of my old friends who went to a high school with me. I have broken up with them after graduation and I haven`t seen for a while. 2. What are things you need to consider when planning a get-together with your friends? I consider to set a time and a place first when I meet my friends. Depend on a time and a place, we decide ether having dinner or drinking some alcohol get together.

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1. Who are the people you haven`t seen for a while?
They are some of my old friends who went to a high school with me. 
>>> correct.
>>> OR: They are some of my old friends back in high school.      
I have broken up with them after graduation and I haven`t seen for a while.
>>> I have parted with them after graduation and I haven`t seen them for a while.      
2. What are things you need to consider when planning a get-together with your friends?
I consider to set a time and a place first when I meet my friends. 
>>> correct.
Depend on a time and a place, we decide ether having dinner or drinking some alcohol get together.
>>> Depending on the time and place, we decide either to have dinner or drink some alcohol together.       

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