Who are the top actors in your country?

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There are many top actors  in our country.

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They are not only famous, but also well-received by people.

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When they act, people cannot choice but to be engrossed in thier acting since the actors act as if it is reality.

>> When they act, people cannot choose but to be engrossed in their acting since the actors act naturally.

If the actors are happy or sad, people also become enjoyable and mournful.

>> If the actors are happy or sad, people also become enjoyable and mournful.
Some actors received an award from the famous film awards.

>>Some actors received an award from different famous film awards.

Doyeong Jun is the example.

>> Doyeong Jun is just an example.

She was invited and received the Canne Award for best actress.

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It was the first time when Korean actor won the prize in international film festival.

>> That was the first award won by a Korean actor in an international film festival.

Even though I know her directly, at that time I was very pleased with the new because I love her acting and I was proud of her as the same Korean.

>> Even though I know her personally, at that time I was very pleased with the news because I love her acting and I was proud of her as a Korean. 
Besides, I like Jiwon Ha who is famous for the ability to cover wide-range drama genre.

>> Besides that, I like Jiwon Ha because he is famous for his ability to portray dram roles.

She has performed various drama from the romance, action, to historical drama.

>> She has performed various roles in different genres such as romance, action, and historical drama.

Especially, her action is well-received by people involved in broadcasting and viewer.

>> Especially, her acting, which is well-received by people involved in broadcasting and viewer.

I think she is very wonderful.

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I\'m looking forward to her next drama.

>>I\'m looking forward to her next drama movie.