Who are the world’s biggest war criminals? Write about one person at least.

2023-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think Itō Hirobumi is a biggest war criminal. Ito invaded Joseon, and national authority. Japan killed queen of Joseon while he was in power.

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Who are the world’s biggest war criminals? Write about one person at least.

I think Itō Hirobumi is a biggest war criminal.

>> Personally, I think Ito Hirobumi is the biggest war criminal.

Ito invaded Joseon, and national authority.

>> Ito invaded Joseon and suppressed its national authority.

Japan killed queen of Joseon while he was in power.

>> Japan killed the queen of Joseon while he was in power.

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