Who, besides your parents, had the biggest impact on your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
The people who influenced me the most in my childhood were my sisters and brother.
I have one younger brother and four younger sisters.
They were my best friends and mentors and helpers who helped me overcome difficulties.
I think it was thanks to them that I was able to become who I am today.
I always thank to them.
Even now, we are living well, helping each other as we did when we were young.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer!
You\'re parents must be so proud because they were able to raise good children.
The people who influenced me the most in my childhood were my sisters and brother.
>>> CORRECT!
I have one younger brother and four younger sisters.
>>> CORRECT!
They were my best friends and mentors and helpers who helped me overcome difficulties.
>>> CORRECT!
I think it was thanks to them that I was able to become who I am today.
>>> CORRECT!
I always thank to them.
>>> I am always thankful to them.
Even now, we are living well, helping each other as we did when we were young.
>>> CORRECT!
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