Who, besides your parents, had the biggest impact on your childhood?

2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think my brother gave me the biggest impact on my chilhood besides my parents. I was able to grow my social ability more faster and I think I had a lot of great time with my brother. I learned how to thank to other people and how to apolosize to other people. That\'s why I think my brother gave me the biggest impact on my chilhood besides my parents.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

There are certain people in our lives that has made a great impact in our lives. Most of them come from our childhood. We wouldn\'t be who we are today without their help.

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I think my brother gave me the biggest impact on my chilhood besides my parents.

>>I think my brother has the biggest impact on my childhood besides my parents.

I was able to grow my social ability more faster and I think I had a lot of great time with my brother.

>> I was able to grow my social skills faster and I think I had a lot of great time with my brother.

I learned how to thank to other people and how to apolosize to other people.

>> I learned how to thank other people and how to apologize as well.

That\'s why I think my brother gave me the biggest impact on my chilhood besides my parents.

>> That\'s why I think my brother had the biggest impact on my childhood besides my parents.

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