Who, besides your parents, had the biggest impact on your childhood?

2021-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it was my friends. Because they made my character and they spent the most time with me. Moreover they shared experience with me.

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There are certain people in our lives that has made a great impact in our lives. Most of them come from our childhood. We wouldn\'t be who we are today without their help.

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I think it was my friends. Because they made my character and they spent the most time with me.

>> I think it would be my friends because they made my character and they spent most of their time with me.

Moreover they shared experience with me.

>> Moreover, they shared experiences with me.

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