Who, besides your parents, had the biggest impact on your childhood?
학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe my friends had the biggest impact on my childhood.
Because I spend the most time on playing with my friends except for my family.
And when I was young, I played with my friends and learned how to make friends.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
Because I spend the most time on playing with my friends except for my family.
And when I was young, I played with my friends and learned how to make friends.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Maybe my friends had the biggest impact on my childhood.
>> CORRECT!
Because I spend the most time on playing with my friends except for my family.
>> Because I spend the most time playing with my friends except for my family.
And when I was young, I played with my friends and learned how to make friends.
>> CORRECT!
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