Who can always comfort you?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I fail or I am depressed, I get comfort from my husband or my friends.
As my elder daughter grows up, sometimes she might comfort me.
I usually do my best to recover my feelings and faliures for myself.
I try to effort how to maintain good condition in my mind and body.
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Who can always comfort you?
When I fail or I am depressed, I get comfort from my husband or my friends.
>>When I fail or I am depressed, I get some comfort from my husband or my friends.
or>>When I fail or I am depressed, I get comforted by my husband or my friends.
As my elder daughter grows up, sometimes she might comfort me.
As my elder daughter grows up, sometimes she might comfort me.
>>As my elder daughter is already a grown up, sometimes, she comforts me as well.
I usually do my best to recover my feelings and faliures for myself.
I usually do my best to recover my feelings and faliures for myself.
>>I usually do my best to recover on my own from the depression and the sense of failure I would be feeling.
I try to effort how to maintain good condition in my mind and body.
I try to effort how to maintain good condition in my mind and body.
>>I try to make an effort in having a good physical and mental condition.
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