Who communicates better: men or women?

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I think men is better than women to communicate for the some reasons.

>> I think, men communicate better than women for some reasons.
First, men think simply im comparision with women.

>> Firstly, men think simply compared with women.

When I meet boyfriends, I don\'t need to think too much, but I need to be careful a lot of things because women mind what the people who talk with her think about and their feeling, and It makes them hard to communicate.

>> When I meet my male friends, I don\'t need to think too much, but when I am talking with other women, I need to be careful with a lot of things because they mind what others think and feel about them, which makes it difficult for them to communicate with other people.

On the other hand, men usually say directly, and It easy to understand. 

>> Did you mean: On the other hand, men are usually honest and are easy to understand.
Second, men is more comfortable than women in conversation.

>> Secondly, men are more comfortable than women when engaging in conversation.

In my experince, I enjoy talking with someone in comfortable mood.

>> In my experience, I enjoy talking with someone in a comfortable mood.  

Even though most my boyfriends use bad words when they have talk, it makes the atmosphere be friendly.

>> Even though most my male friends use bad words when they talk, it makes the atmosphere friendly. 
How about comparing tendency between men and women when you talk with them?

>> How about comparing men and women and their tendencies on something when you talk with them?