Who do you admire the most? Why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
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I admire my family. because my family is even if it's hard it work well, and my mom and dad is open mind, so they know very well our feeling
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I admire my family. because my family is even if it\'s hard it work well, and my mom and dad is open mind, so they know very well our feeling
>> I admire my family the most because my family stays together even when we are having troubles, my parents are open-minded so they know us well.
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