Who do you admire? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The person I admire is IU who is a famous singer and songwriter in Korea. I could start by mentioning that she is perfect in every way. She is not only a popular singer but also a talented songwriter. She has a sweet and amazing voice. In addition to being a singer, She is also renowned as an actor. Her songs are so inspiring and attractive, which always cheer me up whenever I\'m feeling stressed. Something else I need to comment on is that she is very kind-hearted and sympathetic. Every year, she donates to charities in her and her fans\' names to assist people in need.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]! ^^
I totally agree with you. IU is not only beautiful on the outside, but also on the inside. ^^
Thank you for making great sentences!
Thank you for making great sentences!
- T. Rina
1. The person I admire is IU who is a famous singer and songwriter in Korea.
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2. I could start by mentioning that she is perfect in every way.
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3. She is not only a popular singer but also a talented songwriter.
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4. She has a sweet and amazing voice.
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5. In addition to being a singer, She is also renowned as an actor.
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6. Her songs are so inspiring and attractive, which always cheer me up whenever I\'m feeling stressed.
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7. Something else I need to comment on is that she is very kind-hearted and sympathetic.
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8. Every year, she donates to charities in her and her fans\' names to assist people in need.
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