Who do you think has life easier, girls or guys? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Life is not easy.
Life is really difficult for everyone.
Not important who has which genders.
Every people has the problems.
Because God is just.
Each gender have the problems when do the social life.
But we can\'t measure the problem of size.
We just overcome their own difficulties.
Maybe each person feel their own problems that are most difficult.
Now my family and i got the problems.
So when i saw the question.
I thought my life and then come up the line in bible.
\'the temptations in your life are no different from what others experience.
And God is faithful. he will not allow the temptation to be more than u can stand.
When u are tempted, he will show u a way out so that u can endure.\' 1 corinthians 10-13
In conclusion, every people has the temptations in their life.
Sometime, gender makes the problem or age or nationality or etc.
We can endure and victory.
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Hello there Simon! It was great reading your composition. Thank you for sharing your thoughts through writing. You did a great job since you were able to express yourself. Until the next one. Talk to you in class.
Not important who has which genders.
>>It\'s not important on what gender you are.
Every people has the problems.
>>Every person has problems.
Because God is just.
>>CORRECT
Each gender have the problems when do the social life.
>>Each gender has some problems in their social life.
But we can\'t measure the problem of size.
>>But we can\'t measure the problem in quantity.
We just overcome their own difficulties.
>>We just overcome our difficulties normally.
Maybe each person feel their own problems that are most difficult.
>>Maybe some people feel that their problems are the most difficult ones.
Now my family and i got the problems.
>>Now, my family and I got some problems.
So when i saw the question. I thought my life and then come up the line in bible.
>>So when I saw the question, I thought of my life and then come up with a line from the Bible.
\'the temptations in your life are no different from what others experience.
And God is faithful. he will not allow the temptation to be more than u can stand.
When u are tempted, he will show u a way out so that u can endure.\' 1 corinthians 10-13
>>Thank you for sharing this verse from the Bible. :)
In conclusion, every people has the temptations in their life.
>>In conclusion, every person has temptations in their lives.
Sometime, gender makes the problem or age or nationality or etc.
>>Sometimes, gender makes the problem even age and nationality.
We can endure and victory.
~ Teacher Sheila \\^_^/
Life is not easy.
>>CORRECT
Life is really difficult for everyone.
>>CORRECT
Life is really difficult for everyone.
>>CORRECT
Not important who has which genders.
>>It\'s not important on what gender you are.
OR>>It\'s not based on the person\'s gender.
Every people has the problems.
>>Every person has problems.
Because God is just.
>>CORRECT
Each gender have the problems when do the social life.
>>Each gender has some problems in their social life.
But we can\'t measure the problem of size.
>>But we can\'t measure the problem in quantity.
OR>>But we can\'t measure the problem.
We just overcome their own difficulties.
>>We just overcome our difficulties normally.
Maybe each person feel their own problems that are most difficult.
>>Maybe some people feel that their problems are the most difficult ones.
Now my family and i got the problems.
>>Now, my family and I got some problems.
OR>>Now, my family and I have some problems.
So when i saw the question. I thought my life and then come up the line in bible.
>>So when I saw the question, I thought of my life and then come up with a line from the Bible.
\'the temptations in your life are no different from what others experience.
And God is faithful. he will not allow the temptation to be more than u can stand.
When u are tempted, he will show u a way out so that u can endure.\' 1 corinthians 10-13
>>Thank you for sharing this verse from the Bible. :)
In conclusion, every people has the temptations in their life.
>>In conclusion, every person has temptations in their lives.
OR>>In conclusion, every person is tempted through out their lives.
Sometime, gender makes the problem or age or nationality or etc.
>>Sometimes, gender makes the problem even age and nationality.
We can endure and victory.
>>We can endure and be victorious.
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