Who do you think has life easier, girls or guys? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Sheila
Hello there~ This is [Name].
My favorite singer is hard to say who. I hope heard many singer\'s song.
Teacher likes Bruno Mars. I know him. Do you know\"24k magic\"?
This song is o.s.t tracks for the football game,\"pes 2018\". Sound is very rhythmical.
Today\'s my wrong pronunciation: 1. this day -> these days
Homework: Who do you think has life easier, girls or guys? Why?
I think guys life easier. Because they\'re different the body character. Guys have an advantage.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! It seems that you like a lot of singers.
I think I heard most of Bruno Mars songs.
My favorite songs of Bruno are \"When I was your man and Talking to the moon.\"
Until the next one!
See you in class! ^_^
~Teacher Sheila :)
>>It\'s hard to say who my favorite singer is.
I hope heard many singer\'s song.
>>I heard a lot of songs from different singers.
>>I heard a lot of songs from different singers.
Teacher likes Bruno Mars. I know him.
>>CORRECT
Do you know\"24k magic\"?
>>CORRECT
This song is o.s.t tracks for the football game,\"pes 2018\".
>>This song is the O.S.T. for the football game \"PES 2018.\"
Sound is very rhythmical.
>>The sound is very rhythmical.
I think guys life easier.
>>I think guys\' life is easier.
Because they\'re different the body character.
>>Because their body character is different.
Guys have an advantage.
>>CORRECT
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