Who do you think is the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that the best candidate is Lee Jaemyeong. In fact, I don\'t like all candidates because they have bad news like problems about business and investment. However, Koreans should choose one to vote. So, I thought that \'Lee Jaemyeong is better because I know his abilities.\' He has initiative and driving force. I hope that a candidate who can lead Korea well is voted by citizens.
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Hi Kimberly!
Let\'s hope for the best candidate to win. :)
I think that the best candidate is Lee Jaem-yeong.
>> CORRECT
In fact, I don\'t like all candidates because they have bad news like problems about business and investment.
>> In fact, I don\'t like all candidates because they have bad reputations like problems about businesses and investments.
However, Koreans should choose one to vote.
>> CORRECT
So, I thought that \'Lee Jaemyeong is better because I know his abilities.\'
>> So, I thought that Lee Jaem-yeong is better because I know his abilities.
He has initiative and driving force.
>> He has the initiative and driving force.
I hope that a candidate who can lead Korea well is voted by citizens.
>> I hope that a candidate who can lead South Korea well is voted by citizens.
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