Who do you think is the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea and why?

2022-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea was Ahn Cheol-soo. I thought that he is the best person for president and my family thought so, but he resigned. So my parents were not able to elect him. So there is a little regret because of it.

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Oh, I\'ve never heard about this candidate before. I\'ll look him up.

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I think the best candidate for president during this election in South Korea was Ahn Cheol-soo.

>> I think the best candidate for president of South Korea this election was Ahn Cheol-soo.

I thought that he is the best person for president and my family thought so, but he resigned.

>> Me and my family thought that he was perfect for the position but he resigned.

So my parents were not able to elect him.

>> CORRECT

So there is a little regret because of it.

>> There is a little regret because of this.

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