Who do you think is the best president of your country and why?

2022-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think the best president is Lee Myeong Park. He used to be a CEO, so he was very good at diplomatic relations and problems because he was a bu[이름]essman like he has made the country profit a lot. But now, He\'s in prison. :)

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I think the best president is Lee Myeong Park.

>> I think the best president was Lee Myeong Park.

He used to be a CEO, so he was very good at diplomatic relations and problems because he was a bu[이름]essman like he has made the country profit a lot.

>> He used to be a CEO so he was very good at diplomatic relations and problem. He was a bu[이름]essman so he has made a lot of profit for the country.

But now, He\'s in prison. :)

>> But not he\'s in prison.

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