Who do you think is the best president of your country and why?

2022-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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In my opinion, Roh Moo Hyun the President was the best president in my country. Even tough he didn\'t graduate an university, he became a president. He was a great lawyer before being a president, and he did a lot of great jobs. And after being a president, he tried to behave for everybody in the country. Because of these reasons, I think he was the best president in my country.

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Hi [이름]!

He sounds like a very humble person. :)

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In my opinion, Roh Moo Hyun the President was the best president in my country.\'
>> In my opinion, Roh Moo Hyun was the best president in our country.

Even tough he didn\'t graduate an university, he became a president.
>> Even though he didn\'t graduate from a university, he still became a president.

He was a great lawyer before being a president, and he did a lot of great jobs.
>> CORRECT

And after being a president, he tried to behave for everybody in the country.
>> CORRECT

Because of these reasons, I think he was the best president in my country.
>> CORRECT

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