Who do you think is the greatest inventor of all time? Explain your answer.
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In my opinion, the greatest inventor of all time is [이름] William Mauchly.
He invented a very useful tool in our lives, it is a computer.
He invented a computer with Presper Eckert Jr. and nowadays, we are using computers.
It can save a lot of data with 1 and 0.
And we can search many kinds of data in the Internet by using a computer.
So in my opinion, the greatest inventor of all time is [이름] William Mauchly and Presper Eckert Jr.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]:)
That is indeed true. Computers play a vital role in our lives. A lot of things depend on it so we really have to thank these inventors you have mentioned.
>> CORRECT
He invented a very useful tool in our lives, it is a computer.
>>He invented a very useful device for us which is a computer.
He invented a computer with Presper Eckert Jr. and nowadays, we are using computers.
>> He invented it with Presper Eckert Jr. and until now, we are using it.
It can save a lot of data with 1 and 0.
>> CORRECT
And we can search many kinds of data in the Internet by using a computer.
>> We can search a lot of data through the internet using it.
So in my opinion, the greatest inventor of all time is [이름] William Mauchly and Presper Eckert Jr.
>> So in my opinion, the greatest inventors of all time are [이름] William Mauchly and Presper Eckert Jr.
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