Who do you think is the most beautiful actor actress working today?
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When I was younger, in my high school and college days, I was not a person who was interested in the entertainment industry. I could hardly identify or remember the name of celebrities. Even today, I’m not good at recognizing young actors or actresses who are popular. There are so many beautiful actors and actresses who are working today. However, they all look the same to me, especially the young actresses. Most of actresses seem to have a cosmetic surgery, so that their individual differences can be hardly noticeable. They don’t have their own identity. Young actors look like princes in the cartoon. They look good, but I don’t feel like they are real persons. They look like just well-drawn figures, but don’t give off any human touch. I judge that a beautiful person should be humane. A good looking face doesn’t only mean that they should look good, but also it should show generosity, experience, calmness, and confidence. We don’t have to compare ourselves with movie stars.
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Happy Thursday Sir [이름]!
Perfect composition once again. ^^
I agree with you that some of the actresses look similar.
It is their skills an personality that make them different from each other.
Have a great day to you. See you in class.
Teacher Nina
When I was younger, in my high school and college days, I was not a person who was interested in the entertainment industry.
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I could hardly identify or remember the name of celebrities.
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Even today, I’m not good at recognizing young actors or actresses who are popular.
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There are so many beautiful actors and actresses who are working today.
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However, they all look the same to me, especially the young actresses.
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Most of actresses seem to have a cosmetic surgery, so that their individual differences can be hardly noticeable.
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They don’t have their own identity.
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Young actors look like princes in the cartoon.
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They look good, but I don’t feel like they are real persons.
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They look like just well-drawn figures, but don’t give off any human touch.
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I judge that a beautiful person should be humane.
>> correct
A good looking face doesn’t only mean that they should look good, but also it should show generosity, experience, calmness, and confidence.
>> correct
We don’t have to compare ourselves with movie stars.
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