Who do you think is the most beautiful person in your country? Who do you think is the most beautifu
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Beauty is not being really.
>>Beauty is not being only based on physical.
We can’t see and touch that.
>>CORRECT!
>>We can\'t see nor touch it.
So it is difficult to set a standard about beauty.
>>CORRECT!
>>Setting a standard about beauty is hard.
The standard of beauty is differ by person.
>>CORRECT!
>>The standard of beauty is differ by various people.
I think that ‘beautiful’ and ‘Pretty’ is differ subtly.
>>CORRECT!
We usually use these word similarly.
>>CORRECT!
But I think ‘beautiful’ is more comprehensive word.
>>CORRECT!
We just use ‘pretty’ when we compliment someone’s appearance.
>>CORRECT!
However, ‘beautiful’ is used when we felt something better than appearance.
>>CORRECT!
So ‘beautiful’ can be used not only woman but also man.
>> So ‘beautiful’ can be used not only to women but also men.
Anyone can be beautiful person.
>>Anyone can be a beautiful person.
I respect many people in my country.
>>CORRECT!
They are people who are the best on their field and have had a good influence.
>>CORRECT!
For example, ‘Jimin Han’ is a very famous actress in my country and she also famous good person.
>> For example, ‘Jimin Han’ is a very famous actress in my country and she\'s also known as a good person.
She is pretty and have good acting skill.
>>She is pretty and has good acting skills.
Also, she is donating and doing voluntary activity continuously.
>>CORRECT!
>>She continually donate and does voluntary activities.
People always compliment her appearance and her good mind.
>>CORRECT!
>>People always compliment her appearance and her kindness.
We feel she is beautiful person.
>>CORRECT!
>>We feel she is a beautiful person.
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