Who do you think is the most beautiful person in your country? Who do you think is the most beautifu

2019-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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Beauty is not being really. We can’t see and touch that. So it is difficult to set a standard about beauty. The standard of beauty is differ by person. I think that ‘beautiful’ and ‘Pretty’ is differ subtly. We usually use these word similarly. But I think ‘beautiful’ is more comprehensive word. We just use ‘pretty’ when we compliment someone’s appearance. However, ‘beautiful’ is used when we felt something better than appearance. So ‘beautiful’ can be used not only woman but also man. Anyone can be beautiful person. I respect many people in my country. They are people who are the best on their field and have had a good influence. For example, ‘Jimin Han’ is a very famous actress in my country and she also famous good person. She is pretty and have good acting skill. Also, she is donating and doing voluntary activity continuously. People always compliment her appearance and her good mind. We feel she is beautiful person.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Se [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


Beauty is not being really.

>>Beauty is not being only based on physical.


 We can’t see and touch that.

>>CORRECT!

>>We can\'t see nor touch it.


So it is difficult to set a standard about beauty.

>>CORRECT!

>>Setting a standard about beauty is hard.


The standard of beauty is differ by person.

>>CORRECT!

>>The standard of beauty is differ by various people. 

 I think that ‘beautiful’ and ‘Pretty’ is differ subtly.

>>CORRECT!


We usually use these word similarly.

>>CORRECT!


But I think ‘beautiful’ is more comprehensive word.

>>CORRECT!


We just use ‘pretty’ when we compliment someone’s appearance.

>>CORRECT!


 However, ‘beautiful’ is used when we felt something better than appearance.

>>CORRECT!

 So ‘beautiful’ can be used not only woman but also man.

>> So ‘beautiful’ can be used not only to women but also men.


Anyone can be beautiful person.

>>Anyone can be a beautiful person.

 I respect many people in my country.

>>CORRECT!


They are people who are the best on their field and have had a good influence.

>>CORRECT!

 For example, ‘Jimin Han’ is a very famous actress in my country and she also famous good person.

>> For example, ‘Jimin Han’ is a very famous actress in my country and she\'s also known as a good person.


She is pretty and have good acting skill.

>>She is pretty and has good acting skills.


 Also, she is donating and doing voluntary activity continuously.

>>CORRECT!

>>She continually donate and does voluntary activities.


 People always compliment her appearance and her good mind.

>>CORRECT!

>>People always compliment her appearance and her kindness.


We feel she is beautiful person.

>>CORRECT!

>>We feel she is a beautiful person.

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