Who do you think is the most beautiful person in your country? Why?

2020-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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I can\'t conclude who the most beautiful person in my country is. I think everyone can be the most beautiful person. Because at first, I think about the most beautiful person on the outside. But now I think everyone who smiles and cries for someone can be internally beautiful.

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Hello [이름]! :)

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- Tricia

I can\'t conclude who the most beautiful person in my country is.
>> I can\'t conclude who\'s the most beautiful person in my country.

I think everyone can be the most beautiful person.
>> CORRECT!

Because at first, I think about the most beautiful person on the outside.
>> Because firstly, I look at the most beautiful person\'s outside appearance.

But now I think everyone who smiles and cries for someone can be internally beautiful.
>> CORRECT!

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