Who do you think is the worst superhero? Why?
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I think the worst superhero is Thanos in movie\" Avengers\".
I think Thanos is very cool and scared.
He tried to destroy the Earth, So I hate him.
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I\'m sending you your edited composition. Please check the corrections and alternative expressions, such as \"I think or I believe\" and the difference between \"scared\" and \"scary\". Enjoy your evening there!
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Who do you think is the worst superhero? Why?
I think the worst superhero is Thanos in movie\" Avengers\".
>> I believe the worst superhero is Thanos in the movie “Avengers”.
I think Thanos is very cool and scared.
>> I think Thanos is very cool but scary.
He tried to destroy the Earth, So I hate him.
>> He tried to destroy Earth so I hate him.
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