Who do you think is your role model and why did you choose him or her as your role model?

Hi, Yeong^^

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My role model is making a home by one’s own hand.
>> My role model is the one making a home with himself/herself.

I admire those people who are free will, a man/woman to self-improvement, thinking different and independent.
>>I admire those people who have a free will for there self improvement, thinking differently and being independent.

That’s why I choose this type people. I don’t have specific role model people. However I admire who has great free will.
>> That’s why I choose this type person who will be my role model. I don’t have any specific role models. However, I admire those people who have a great free will.