Who do you think was the best president of South Korea and why?
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Who do you think was the best president of South Korea and why?
I don\'t trust politicians.
That\'s why I don\'t have the best president of South Korea.
But, they have a good and bad point.
Some Presidents implemented a good policy during the their term of office.
Our life has improved a good policy.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Most people usually have different opinion regarding this topic. Every president is different in their own ways. All of them have different advocacies. There is also no president that is perfect. Thanks for sharing your opinion.
I don\'t trust politicians.
That\'s why I don\'t have the best president of South Korea.
But, they have a good and bad point.
Some Presidents implemented a good policy during the their term of office.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I don\'t have the best president of South Korea.
>> That\'s why I don\'t think there is any best president in South Korea.
But, they have a good and bad point.
>> Most of them have good and bad points.
Some Presidents implemented a good policy during the their term of office.
>> Some Presidents implemented good policies during the their term.
Our life has improved a good policy.
>> Our lives have improved because of these.
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