Who do you usually eat out with? How do you feel about eating out alone?
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Q: Who do you usually eat out with?
How do you feel about eating out alone?
A: I usually eat out with my boyfriend.
rencently, I usually eat in dormitory, cos I am in college and don\'t have a lot of money.
So, Althought I like eating out, I eat out twice a week when I see my boyfriend , special days to me.
If I eat out alone, I be all right.
There are many people who eat alone as well as me.
When I eat alone, I think I eat with other people who eat alone.
So I am not lonely.
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I usually eat out with my boyfriend.
>> CORRECT
rencently, I usually eat in dormitory, cos I am in college and don\'t have a lot of money.
>> Nowadays, I usually eat in my dormitory, because I am in college and I don\'t have a lot of money.
So, Althought I like eating out, I eat out twice a week when I see my boyfriend , special days to me.
>> So, Although I like eating out, I eat out twice a week when I see my boyfriend , those are special days to me.
If I eat out alone, I be all right.
>> CORRECT
There are many people who eat alone as well as me.
>> There are many people who eat alone like me as well.
When I eat alone, I think I eat with other people who eat alone.
>> When I eat alone, I eat with other people who eat alone.
So I am not lonely.
>> So, I am not lonely.
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