Who do you usually talk to about your problems?

2020-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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HI, Beth~ It will be cold from now for a while. So I turned the heat up my room about 1 degrees. Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for inspection regularly instead my honey. The inspection time took about 20minitues. But our car was rejected because it need to partial fix . So my honey will revisit to a car repair shop on Saturday. Today, maybe I\'ll be at home all day long because of new virus. ㅜㅜ Our area have a confirmed candidate in Ilsan. So we are very very careful everywhere. Anyway, if I have some problems, I usually talk to my honey about my problems. Of cause, I can do that to my mom or friends. But my mom usually takes seriously anything. So I talk to her about big problem. My honey is my best friend I think. We always talk about 1~2 hours everday at least. Nevertheless, We can\'t stop talking. So we usually oversleep everyday.

강사 첨삭

Hello MS. [이름]. Thank you for this. It\'s good that you married a person you can talk about anything with. It\'s nice to have someone like that.
= T. Beth
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It will be cold from now for a while. 
>>>> correct   
So I turned the heat up my room about 1 degrees.
>>>> So I turned on the heater to het up my room for about a degree higher.   
Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for inspection regularly instead my honey. 
>>>>  Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for regular inspection instead of my honey.   
The inspection time took about 20minitues. 
>>>>  The inspection time took about 20 minutes.
But our car was rejected because it need to partial fix . 
>>>But our car was rejected because it needed partial fixing.   
So my honey will revisit to a car repair shop on Saturday.
>>>> So my honey will revisit the repair shop this coming Sunday.    
Today, maybe I\'ll be at home all day long because of new virus. ㅜㅜ
>>>> Today, I would probably be at home all day long because of the new virus.    
Our area have a confirmed candidate in Ilsan. So we are very very careful everywhere.
>>>> Our area has a confirmed case in Ilsan so we are quite careful going anywhere.  
Anyway, if I have some problems, I usually talk to my honey about my problems.
>>>> correct.   
Of cause, I can do that to my mom or friends. But my mom usually takes seriously anything. 
>>>> Of course, I can do that to my mom or friends but my mom would usually take anything too seriously.     
So I talk to her about big problem.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: So I only talk to her about big problems.    
My honey is my best friend I think. 
>>>>  My honey is my best friend, I think.   
We always talk about 1~2 hours everday at least. 
>>>> We always talk for at least 1 to 2 hours everyday.   
Nevertheless, We can\'t stop talking. 
>>>> Nevertheless, we can\'t stop talking.    
So we usually oversleep everyday.
>>>> correct   

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