Who do you usually talk to about your problems?
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HI, Beth~
It will be cold from now for a while. So I turned the heat up my room about 1 degrees.
Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for inspection regularly instead my honey. The inspection time took about 20minitues. But our car was rejected because it need to partial fix . So my honey will revisit to a car repair shop on Saturday.
Today, maybe I\'ll be at home all day long because of new virus. ㅜㅜ
Our area have a confirmed candidate in Ilsan. So we are very very careful everywhere.
Anyway, if I have some problems, I usually talk to my honey about my problems.
Of cause, I can do that to my mom or friends. But my mom usually takes seriously anything. So I talk to her about big problem.
My honey is my best friend I think. We always talk about 1~2 hours everday at least. Nevertheless, We can\'t stop talking. So we usually oversleep everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello MS. [이름]. Thank you for this. It\'s good that you married a person you can talk about anything with. It\'s nice to have someone like that.
= T. Beth
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It will be cold from now for a while. >>>> correct
So I turned the heat up my room about 1 degrees.
>>>> So I turned on the heater to het up my room for about a degree higher.
Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for inspection regularly instead my honey.
Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for inspection regularly instead my honey.
>>>> Yesterday, I went to a car repair shop for regular inspection instead of my honey.
The inspection time took about 20minitues.
>>>> The inspection time took about 20 minutes.
But our car was rejected because it need to partial fix .
>>>> But our car was rejected because it needed partial fixing.
So my honey will revisit to a car repair shop on Saturday.
>>>> So my honey will revisit the repair shop this coming Sunday.
Today, maybe I\'ll be at home all day long because of new virus. ㅜㅜ
Today, maybe I\'ll be at home all day long because of new virus. ㅜㅜ
>>>> Today, I would probably be at home all day long because of the new virus.
Our area have a confirmed candidate in Ilsan. So we are very very careful everywhere.
>>>> Our area has a confirmed case in Ilsan so we are quite careful going anywhere.
Anyway, if I have some problems, I usually talk to my honey about my problems.
>>>> correct.
Of cause, I can do that to my mom or friends. But my mom usually takes seriously anything.
Of cause, I can do that to my mom or friends. But my mom usually takes seriously anything.
>>>> Of course, I can do that to my mom or friends but my mom would usually take anything too seriously.
So I talk to her about big problem.
>>>> correct
>>>> OR: So I only talk to her about big problems.
My honey is my best friend I think.
>>>> My honey is my best friend, I think.
We always talk about 1~2 hours everday at least.
>>>> We always talk for at least 1 to 2 hours everyday.
Nevertheless, We can\'t stop talking.
>>>> Nevertheless, we can\'t stop talking.
So we usually oversleep everyday.
>>>> correct
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