Who else is better than Mr. [Name] as a president? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think first is Roh Moohyun is better than Mr. [Name] as a president because he only thinks Korean people.
Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. [Name] because he enforced Rok-US allince and helps Ukraine.
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Who else is better than Mr. [Name] as president? Explain your answer.
I think first is Roh Moohyun is better than Mr. [Name] as a president because he only thinks Korean people.
>> First, I think Roh Moohyun was better than Mr. [Name] as a president because he only thinks of the Korean people.
Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. [Name] because he enforced Rok-US allince and helps Ukraine.
>> Second, I think Joe Biden is better than Mr. [Name] because he enforced the Rok-US alliance and is helping Ukraine.
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