Who has had the most influence in your life?

2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

학생이 쓴 원문

There are a lot of people who influence me, but in this time, I\'d like to explain about my father. Not only my appearance but also my character is inherited from my father. Endurance, studiousness, kindness and so on... My father also supports me as best he can. He always says to me, \'keep going forward. You are doing well.\' He doesn\'t press me to meet a good results. My father trust me totally. With this confidence, I can keep concentrate on my work. He is one of the best person in my life and I love him a lot.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Great work! I bet you\'re father loves you so much more :)


T. Lainey <\",)))><


There are a lot of people who influence me, but in this time, I\'d like to explain about my father.

>>> correct


 Not only my appearance but also my character is inherited from my father.

>>> correct

>>> OR: Not only how I look but also my character is inherited from my father.


 Endurance, studiousness, kindness and so on...

>>> correct


 My father also supports me as best he can.

>>> correct


 He always says to me, \'keep going forward. You are doing well.\'

>>> correct


 He doesn\'t press me to meet a good results.

>>> correct


 My father trust me totally.

>>> correct


 With this confidence, I can keep concentrate on my work.

>>> With this confidence, I can keep myself focused on my work.


 He is one of the best person in my life and I love him a lot

>>> correct


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