Who has had the most influence in your life?
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Hi Su ^^
Great work! I bet you\'re father loves you so much more :)
T. Lainey <\",)))><
There are a lot of people who influence me, but in this time, I\'d like to explain about my father.
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Not only my appearance but also my character is inherited from my father.
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>>> OR: Not only how I look but also my character is inherited from my father.
Endurance, studiousness, kindness and so on...
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My father also supports me as best he can.
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He always says to me, \'keep going forward. You are doing well.\'
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He doesn\'t press me to meet a good results.
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My father trust me totally.
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With this confidence, I can keep concentrate on my work.
>>> With this confidence, I can keep myself focused on my work.
He is one of the best person in my life and I love him a lot
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