Who I am...
학생이 쓴 원문
My name is [이름]. And I\'ll like to tell you who I am.
First, I will tell you my age. I am twelve years old in international age and, I am in middle s[이름]ol. I\'m just a ordinary student who like to hang out with friends and who wants to get good score in s[이름]ol exams.
Second, where I am from. I am [Name], (which is obvious) who really love Korean food.
Third, things I hate. I am a person who hates to eat avocados. It is very yucky and disgusting for me. It taste like grass for me. Plus, I really hate exams.
Lastly, I am person who have lots of hobbies. I like to take picture (but not really good;;;), playing video games and, reading books. I like to hang out with my friends but that\'s not my hobbies.
To sum up, it was all about me and who I am!
강사 첨삭
My name is [이름].
>> Correct.
And I\'ll like to tell you who I am.
>> Correct.
First, I will tell you my age.
>> Correct.
I am twelve years old in international age and, I am in middle s[이름]ol.
>> Correct.
I\'m just a ordinary student who like to hang out with friends and who wants to get good score in s[이름]ol exams.
>> I\'m just an ordinary student who likes to hang out with friends and who wants to get a good score in s[이름]ol exams.
Second, where I am from. I am [Name], (which is obvious) who really love Korean food.
>> Correct.
Third, things I hate. I am a person who hates to eat avocados.
>> Correct.
It is very yucky and disgusting for me. It taste like grass for me.
>> It is very yucky and disgusting for me. It tastes like grass.
Plus, I really hate exams.
Lastly, I am person who have lots of hobbies.
>> Plus, I really hate exams.
Lastly, I am a person who has lots of hobbies.
I like to take picture (but not really good;;;), playing video games and, reading books.
>> I like to take pictures (but not really good;;;), playing video games and, reading books.
I like to hang out with my friends but that\'s not my hobbies.
>> I like to hang out with my friends but that\'s not my hobby.
To sum up, it was all about me and who I am!
>> >> Correct.
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